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Victoria's Story .:part 1:.

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Victoria the Echidna was born on December 15th...uh....I don't know what year. She was loved by her parents Jorge and Julian the Echidna, and her 14 year old brother, Joel. She was born in Miracle hospital in Swifton, Mobious. She was loved by her family, but not much friends.

How about we skip two years later to where the INTERESTING part of her life started...

Victoria was a happy 2 year old echidna! She didn't have many friends, but she was stilll loved. Until one day...she was at the park alone and was about to go home, but she tripped. Another echidna boy named Lucas, came and took Victoria to his house to get her a bandaid. He welcomed her inside his house, gave her a bandage,a nd his mother gave her some fresh strawberries. Which was the beginning of her strawberry obsession. She realized it was almost 5 o'clock when she was suppose to be home at 4:30. She thanked them and left...that was the last time Lucas saw Victoria as a child. She returned home before dinner and told her mom she was alright. But Julian yelled at Victoria for being late. Victoria explained why she was late and brought home some extra strawberries. All Julian did was throw the strawberries on the ground and yelled at Victoria more. Victoria was scared, not knowing what would happen next. Then Julian did the unthinkable, she punched Victoria in the stomach and Victoria was angst the wall. Victoria was in tears. Julian use to be one of the sweetest mothers in Swifton, but now abusing a 2 year old? Julian punched Victoria more and more until there was blood. Then Julian heard someone walk through the door. It was Joel, he just came back from his job as a drive through guy at a fast food joint. Julian covered Victoria's mouth, hoping she would be quiet, but Victoria screamed for Joel, hoping he would come and help. Joel came rushing into the kitchen seeing blood on the floor, on Julian's fists, and on his little sister. Joel tried to punch his mother, but he missed and Julian kicked him next to Victoria. She started to beat both of them up. Blood, bruises, and scratch marks all over their body. Julian looked at them with an evil frown and said "If you two ever tell anyone about this, I swear I will break out of prison and kill the both of you! Understand?!" They nodded and ran to the bathroom to wash up. Julian tried her best to clean the stains of blood. But when she couldn't hear Joel and Victoria in the bathroom, there was a converstation. Here it is:

Joel: *locks the door* Victoria, what happened between you and mother?!

Victoria:  I don't know! I came home a little late with strawberries and a skinned knee. Then she threw the strawberries and started yelling and punching me!!

Joel: *takes out cell phone and dials 911*

Victoria: Joelie?! What are you doing?

Joel: calling the police...they will keep us safe

Victoria: *jumps off the sink and grabs his phone*

Joel: GAH! Victoria? What was that for?

Victoria: Mommy said we will die if we told anyone.

Joel: But, we aren't safe with her around us!!

Victoria: We won't be safe if we're away from her either!!

Joel: *looks at Victoria seeing a scared look on her face* *closes his cell phone* You're right...we could die either way....

Victoria: thank you Joel...*smiles*

Joel: You know, for a toddler, you're pretty smart. Come on *puts her back on the sink* lets get cleaned of *turns the faucet and gets sprayed with water* HEY!!

Victoria: *giggles*


One year later....

Victoria and her family moved to a new city, because of house problems. The was perfect! It had a playgroud, kids, a fountain...*sigh* Lukaris was perfect!! The abusing kept going on, but not with Joel. Her broke his promise of telling someone and gave Julian a warning. He inrolled into the Army so that if he gets hurt by Julian, she will be arrested. But the beating kept going on with Victoria. All the kids made fun of her for being new to this city. But soon, Victoria will meet a boy that will change her life...

                                                       

                                                           END OF PART 1
:iconsharktooth247: gave me the idea for making her story. I will make one once a day after school.

All characters belong to ME!!!!!!
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yeaah buti t was kinda loing